Death by Slideshow

As a favor, I agreed to edit a PowerPoint presentation for a client. I took the information they gave me and tried my best to make it succinct. I recently received the client’s feedback on this effort.

I have replaced the text, but I have kept the word count exactly the same. My first slide looked like this…

The client changed it to look like this...

Unfortunately, this presentation is not a meeting of the United Amphetamines Users and I do not believe free triple-shot espressos are included with registration.

Good luck, attendees!